When responding to two others, explore their potential revision strategies and offer additional tips and support. Keep an eye out for revision practices that may need fine-tuning for their specific essays. If you’ve learned something new that will help you, note it! Offer your own support by identifying specific areas and strategies to support their revisions.
Your response posts should each be two fully developed paragraphs (5-8 sentences each).
i have the two essays that need to be responded to